Esther's:
Dad,
I really want a dog (puppy.) Because I want to learn how to be
responsible for a pet. And dogs take a lot of work. So I am going to practice
and practice with other dogs. Then I will be ready to have my own dog. If I
practice and practice I am hoping that I will be able to get a dog.
I will have
a none snoring sleeping partner! (Yippeeeeee.)
I am hoping
I can prove myself to you to earn a dog. If I prove myself and if you pay for
the dog while you are reading this I promise to save up for all the other
stuff. I would also like a dog because we have somebody to watch our house
while we are gone so we have no robbers or anything. I will watch the dog take
for walks let him do his business and all that other stuffy stuff.
I would have
lots of love for a dog even if it doesn’t look very good. I care how the dog
acts not how it looks if I can’t prove myself (IF) I will let you give the dog
back even if I love it to pieces! I
would probably cry for a few hours but eventually I would get over it. Dad if
you don’t except this essay I will probably be very disappointed but I love you
anyway.
Another
reason I would like a dog is for Wesley. Wesley absolutely loves rocky and
probably any other dog. Everybody would thank you 10000000000000000000 times! I want a dog because Lucy, Isaac want one
soooo bad. I have been following along with their ideas but I have gotten into
it too!
Dad I hope
this essay will be good enough for you. This is the longest essay I have ever
done. I hope you enjoy this essay. Love
you to pieces!
Esther Samantha Thompson
Then here is Lucy's. She wrote about 12 pages so here are a few excerpts.
Last but not least, Isaac's essay dictated to Esther.

1 comment:
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this!!! Her essay convinced me. :) What a good little writer you have on your hands. And I just love her honesty ("I would probably be disappointed and cry for a few hours but I would still love you"). I hope the next post is the picture of the puppy :) - with the kids. :)
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